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Drafting Winning Proposals for Legal, Commercial and Strategic Excellence Training Course

Learn to draft clear, compelling proposals that serve as both legal offers and persuasive sales tools - capturing pricing, contractual obligations, and showcasing alignment with customer needs and competitive advantage.

26-27 January 2026
+ 7-8 July 2026 »

from £999

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Course overview

In today’s highly competitive and regulated procurement environment, getting the proposal right is about more than just responding to a brief - it’s about creating a clear, commercially strong and legally robust offer that meets customer needs, manages business risks and showcases why your offering is the preferred option.

This practical and intensive training course has been expertly developed to help commercial and contracts professionals master the art of crafting compelling proposals that serve as both legal and sales documents. From understanding legal positioning in the bidding process to confidently defining scope, pricing risk and articulating value, the expert trainer will explore every critical element that strengthens proposals and increases win rates.

You’ll also learn how to clearly align your proposal with your customer’s decision-making criteria, showcase your organisation’s unique offering and manage the entire bid lifecycle with structure, compliance and clarity.

Whether you're dealing with RFPs, RFQs or ITTs, this course will help you build persuasive proposals that appeal to potential customers in meeting their needs while protecting your exposure to potential risks.

This course is part of our Commercial Management training courses series which aims to help individuals gain confidence in a range of areas surrounding contract law, and broader business management knowledge.

Benefits of attending

By attending this course you will:

  • Learn how to develop strategic, customer-focussed proposals that focus on client’s needs and priorities
  • Reduce legal risk by understanding how proposals become binding and how to avoid hidden legal pitfalls
  • Understand how to enhance risk management by aligning price to risk exposure and limiting liability with effective wordings
  • Get to grips with developing clear value propositions that differentiate your offer
  • Master bid processes by streamlining the process and ensuring compliance through structured internal reviews
  • Enhance your executive summaries and communicate with impact
  • Gain confidence in engaging with procurement professionals during the bid process

Who should attend?

This course will be particularly valuable for all professionals involved in drafting, negotiating or reviewing proposals, including:

  • Commercial managers
  • Contracts managers
  • Contract negotiation specialists
  • Proposal / Bid managers
  • Project managers
  • Business development managers
  • Strategic account managers
  • Procurement managers
  • Operations managers

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This course will cover:

Module 1: The proposal as a legal document

Understanding the bidding process and legal implications

  • Pre-qualification (PQQ’s) / preferred suppliers; Request for Information (RFI); Request for Quotation (RFQ); Invitation to Tender (ITT); Best and Final Offers (BAFO)
  • Legal considerations:
  • Confidentiality – Non-Disclosure Agreement / Confidentiality Agreement
  • Quotation v Invitation to Treat. ‘Subject to contract’
  • Battle of the forms, Offer and Acceptance. The proposal forming part of the legally binding contract
  • Offer duration / expiration

Capturing your scope of supply within a legal framework

  • Clarity of offer
    • Clearly defined obligations and ownership of those obligation including ‘dependencies’ on Customer  
    • Clearly defined acceptance criteria / measurement mechanism
    • Assumptions & Caveats
  • Exercises – Drafting / reviewing a scope of supply. Peer / Red Team reviewing

Pricing to reflect the allocation of liability / risk

  • Allocation of liability / risk and reflecting it in pricing:
    • Clarity of ownership of liability / risk if obligation not met
    • Ensuring price reflects allocation of liability / risk. Quoting subject to own standard terms and conditions or Customer’s terms and conditions
    • Liability for ‘fit for purpose’ - Performance specification v Conformance specification
    • Exclusions / Indemnities / Disclaimers / Limit of Liabilities
    • Managing identified high probability / high impact risks through the contract / solutions not contingency budget
  • Exercise – Price v Scope / Liability & Risk. Removing ambiguity / passing or reducing liability to enable removal of contingency.

Internal governance process

  • Purpose and value
  • ‘Go/No Go’ / ‘Bid/No Bid’ reviews
  • Proposal and Pricing Approvals / Peer or Red Team Reviewing
  • Authorised Representatives / Power of Attorney

Module 2: The proposal as a sales document

‘WHY’ first, then ‘What’ 

  • ‘Start with Why?’ (Simon Sinek) – TED Talk video
  • Exercise – 5 Whys
  • Exercise – Applying the same principles of a ‘Performance Specification’ to drafting a proposal. The outcome of a Performance Specification not the input of a Conformance Specification

Understanding your customer’s needs. What is their ‘problem’ that needs solving?

  • 5 Rights of procurement – Quality, Quantity, Place, Time, Price
  • Commercial Off-The-Shelf (COTS) / standardised v bespoke / need for innovation, research and development
  • RAQSCI - Regulation, Availability, Supply Quality Assurance, Service Requirements, Cost and Innovation
  • 10 C’s - Competency, Capacity, Commitment, Control, Cash, Cost, Consistency, Corporate Social Responsibility/Clean, Culture and relationships, and Communication
  • Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) / sustainability

Understanding your customer’s selection criteria / priorities

  • Kraljic matrix - customer’s businesses priorities - critical, strategic, tactical or bottle neck
  • Iron Triangle - Scope, Schedule, Cost
  • MIL - Must have, Intend to have, Like to have
  • Exercise - MIL

Winning themes - showcasing / story-telling ‘WHY’ your offering is the Customer’s ‘Best Realistic Alternative’ (BRA) / how it meets your customer’s needs / priorities

  • Identifying / communicating your Unique Selling Proposition
    • Porter’s generic strategies – cost leader, differentiation, niche
    • Defining the Value Proposition: unique benefits, measurable value, differentiation/competitive advantage
  • Rationalising your price. MEAT - Most Economically Advantageous Tender / value for money
  • Instilling confidence - demonstrating not just stating. Evidencing credentials / capability / credibility
  • Addressing any negatives past experiences / reviews / issues
  • Capture the key points in your Executive Summary
    • When to write it
    • Structuring, style and content to reflect audience
  • Exercise – Asking leading, open questions of your Customer. PULSE model (Position, Understand, Leverage, Solution, Evolve)
  • Exercise – Capture information from previous exercise and draft Exec Summary 

Offering deviations from requirement set out in RFQ / ITT

  • Proposing alternative / additional options separately from core offering. Explaining reason for deviation, e.g. value added / benefits of alternative / additional options
  • Offering a solution which addresses future requirements
    • Identifying potential opportunities (SWOT – opportunities) for: increased market share and/or cost savings / value engineering (improvements / efficiencies), and showing how these might be realised
    • Addressing potential challenges / risks (SWOT – Threats / STEPPLED – Social, Technological, Economic, Environmental, Political, Legal, Ethical, Demographics), demonstrating how these will be managed to minimise criticality
  • Exercise – Drafting subsection of a proposal offering opportunity
  • Exercise – Drafting subsection of a proposal offering a pro-active risk management contingency plan 

Module 3: Writing the proposal to enable easy evaluation

  • Answering the ‘exam question’ / using customer proforma provided in RFQ but still embedding: WHY you; your unique selling points (USPs) / what differentiates you
  • If no customer proforma, suggested proposal structure.
  • Complying with bid requirements to avoid elimination, enable easy evaluation / comparison by the customer (‘apples for apples’), demonstrating respect to retain good relations.
  • Clarity & easy of understanding. 5C’s / 7C’s of communication – concise, clear, complete, correct, consistent, coherent, concrete, courteous
  • Exercise – 5C’s writing skills

Module 4: Managing the bid process

  • Timing / planning the process to allow Red team / Peer reviewing / Internal governance process complied with
  • Engaging stakeholders
  • Selecting and role of bid team members

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Catherine Hurst
Hurst Consulting and Training Limited

Catherine Hurst BSc(Hons), CIMDip, PgDL, is an independent consultant in the contract and commercial fields. She was formerly a Commercial Manager at BAe Systems, following previous contract/commercial roles with GEC and Siemens. She has extensive practical experience of bid management, contract drafting and negotiation, contract and subcontract management as well as commercial risk management, both with UK and overseas customers and suppliers, in the private and public sectors.

She is a highly experienced trainer, having a style which brings a subject to life, creating interest and stimulating the enthusiasm of delegates. She combines academic best practice with real world experience.

She lecturers Chartered Institute of Procurement and Supply (CIPS) diploma, levels 4, 5 & 6 at Chichester college. As well as being a member of CIPS, Catherine has a degree in Management Studies, a Chartered Institute of Marketing diploma and more recently achieved a distinction in her Common Professional Examination (CPE)/Post-grad diploma in law, winning the prize for the highest achieving student in the contract law module.

Catherine has successfully provided training to organisations across a wide variety of industries, including:

Transport / utilities / energy / construction / engineering / IT / telecons: Network Rail, ScotRail, Balfour Beatty, London Underground, Westinghouse Springfields Fuels, General Dynamics, Siemens, Metronet, Thales, ABB, Hitachi, Jungheinrich, Honeywell, PALL Europe, Senior Aerospace BWT, RES (Renewable Energy Systems), AGI, Silvertown, QinetiQ, Clyde Pumps / Weir Pumps, Scottish Power, NCOC (North Caspian Operating Company), Computacentre, CISCO, BT, United Utilities

Health / pharmaceutical / education: Nuffield Health, Surrey PCT, Bristol Myers-Squibb, Newcastle University, Exeter University

Public: Forensic Science Services, Office for National Statistics, DARA (Defence Aviation Repair Agency), Metropolitan Police

Charity: Phoenix Futures, Homegroup

Retail: Co-op

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NEW higher discounts for multiple bookings - bring your colleagues to make your training budget go further:

  • 30% off the 2nd delegate*
  • 40% off the 3rd delegate*
  • 50% off the 4th delegate*

Please contact us for pricing if you are interested in booking 5 or more delegates

26-27 January 2026

Live online

09:30-17:00 UK (London) (UTC+00)
10:30-18:00 Paris (UTC+01)
04:30-12:00 New York (UTC-05)
Course code 16775

  • GBP 999 1,199
  • EUR 1,399 1,679
  • USD 1,607 1,919

Until 22 Dec

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7-8 July 2026

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09:30-17:00 UK (London) (UTC+01)
10:30-18:00 Paris (UTC+02)
04:30-12:00 New York (UTC-04)
Course code 16776

  • GBP 999 1,199
  • EUR 1,399 1,679
  • USD 1,607 1,919

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Aleksandra Beer

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BEER

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Yesim Nurko

Yesim
NURKO

Training expert

Yesim Nurko

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ALTAMONT

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